Tuesday, December 20, 2011

CHANGES

DUE DATE/TIME: THURSDAY, December 22nd/11:59pm
1.  Always type your FIRST NAME and LAST INITIAL.  Full names will result in a DELETION of the comment and no better than a C grade.

2.  Provide me with some basic citation information about the novel you have chosen to read.  INCORRECT CAPITALZATION and PUNCTUATION will result in a C!!!

Lastname, Firstname. Title of Book. Place of Publication: Publisher, Year of Publication. Medium.

3. Answer the following prompt in a well developed paragraph:

If you could change anything about the main character or the plot of the book, what would it be? Why would you like to make this change?
Be sure to include CITED TEXT to support your opinion.

4. Once you have posted your comment, go back and read through your classmate’s comments about the books they have been reading and comment on one of their posts by asking "I wonder..." questions; or, if you have read the book, you may make more specific comments. Be specific as to which classmate you are responding to.  You must read your classmate’s entries and make a meaningful comment on their work in order to receive an A.

9 comments:

Mrs. Evans said...

Mrs. Evans

Collins, Suzanne. Mockingjay. New York: Scholastic Press, 2010. Print.

In the book, Katniss has become the symbol of the rebel’s cause to overthrow the Capital. Sadly, Peeta has been brainwashed to believe that the Capital is good and Katniss is evil. This hurts Katniss because she truly cares for Peeta and wants to rescue him without harm. If I could change one character, I would undo the brainwashing that Peeta has been subjected to so that he can fight with Katniss instead of against her. “ ‘She’s a liar! You can’t believe anything she says...she killed my friends. She killed my family. Don’t even go near her! She’s a mutt!” (Collins 198). A mutt is an evil mutant and Peeta believes Katniss is the cause of his misery.

Anonymous said...

Jarrod H.

Shusterman, Neal. Bruiser. New York: 2010, scholastic. Print

If i could change anything about the main character i would change the fact that he is so shy. The reason why i would say this is because all the other characters are used in more scenes than him. But somehow he is always used in them. Even though the story is not always in his point of view he is used in every part.

Anonymous said...

Mariah M.

Brashares,Ann. The Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants. New York: Delacorte Press, 2001. Print.

If i could change one thing about my book I would change how four girls use pants to reprent friendship. Why pants? why not bracelets or necklaces. I just don't understand why they would used pants. I would also change how they have to spend one summer apart. There bestfriends they shouldn't be apart." they stand for the promise we made to one another, no matter what happens we stick together."

Anonymous said...

Brianna P

Henry, April. Girl, Stolen.New York New York: 2010. Print.

If i could change anything i would let Cheyenne go even though she is bline i would not let her get kidnapped. "Cheyenne realized she was being kidnapped but she couldn't see the guy who was kidnapping her because for the last three years, Cheyenne had been blind". (Henry, April #3).

Anonymous said...

Brianna P

To: Mrs.Evans

Why would you undo the brainwashing that Peeta is under so he could fight with Katniss?. I also think this book sounds really good.

Anonymous said...

Haley F.

Mills, Claudia. You're a Brave Man, julius Zimmerman. New York: Losers,Inc., 1999. print.

If I could change someone from my book I would have to change Julius and his friend going to summer language learning. i would change this because him and his friend had good grades in all the main classes and they only got a f in french class. their moms find out that they can go to summer school for that and they can pass the class.

Anonymous said...

Haley F.

to:Jarod H.

why would you change her being shy being shy is apart of her fellings.

Anonymous said...

Sarena H.

Hahn, Mary Downing."The Old Willis Place". New York: Clarion Books, 2004. Print.

If I could change one thing about the main character Diana, it woould be how she is risking her life because she wants to be friends with Lissa. "I don't care if I die, I really want to be friends with Lissa." (Hahn 97).

Anonymous said...

To: Haley F.
From: Sarena H.

Why would you change them going to summer school? Because then they can pass.